One thing I learned about you is the challenges you have made in your life like marathon running. Your family is similar to mine because you all seem to come together even through the worst (I'm glad your mom beat breast cancer *big smile*) The best thing about your digital story is the pictures were fantastic. One think you could change is the length of the music. If you go into were you downloaded the song. It shows you how long it lasts. You can restart the song or add another were it ends. Beautiful story.
One thing I learned about you is that you love to run, and that you have a very close family! :) Your family is similar to mine because we also love fishing and spending time outdoors! I remember catching fireflies as a little girl also and was raised on country music! The best thing about your digital story is the pictures and words go together great! Very easy to follow and interesting! I couldn't find anything that stood out in your video to me that needs improvement. I loved your video!
You and I seem to have many things in common. We both love the outdoors (swimming, fishing, 4-wheelin'). I am also from a large family. I have 11 cousins. I have never ran a marathon or in the snow. I think your video was really good; your poem was very nicely written. The only adjustment I would make would be add about 15-20 more seconds of music.
I loved this video! Through watching this, I learned that your mom was a cancer survivor, which is such an incredible story. We have a lot in common, especially since we don't live too far apart! I also love riding four wheelers! My favorite thing about your video is the song. I am so mad haha! I tried for hours to get that song and I could not find an instrumental version of it anywhere! I love "We Rode in Trucks." It definitely signifies where we come from. I wouldn't change a thing about your video, it's great!
One thing I learned about you is that you're a runner. Your family is similar to mine because we both have lots of cousins. The best thing about your digital story is that I can truly tell it's from your heart. One thing you could change is that you have one slide that the word “is” is on its own line. I would fix that.
One thing I learned about you is that you have nieces! I have a niece as well! One thing that we have in common is love for God and family!! The best thing about your video is the part of your mother. You almost made me shed a tear! That is an amazing story, girl! I would maybe change up the music a little bit - there is a little break at the end. Other than that its amazing! Great Job!
One thing I learned about you is your mom survived cancer. Your family is similar than mine because you love to fish and enjoy the outdoors. The best thing about your digital story is the begin grabs you and your hooked. One think you could change is length the song but it's very good!!
I never knew you ran marathons. Your family is like mine because they like to be crazy. I love the end when you say West Virginia will always be home.
ReplyDeleteand the only thing I would change is putting some of the shorter phrases with the pictures
DeleteOne thing I learned about you is the challenges you have made in your life like marathon running. Your family is similar to mine because you all seem to come together even through the worst (I'm glad your mom beat breast cancer *big smile*) The best thing about your digital story is the pictures were fantastic. One think you could change is the length of the music. If you go into were you downloaded the song. It shows you how long it lasts. You can restart the song or add another were it ends. Beautiful story.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you love to run, and that you have a very close family! :)
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar to mine because we also love fishing and spending time outdoors! I remember catching fireflies as a little girl also and was raised on country music!
The best thing about your digital story is the pictures and words go together great! Very easy to follow and interesting!
I couldn't find anything that stood out in your video to me that needs improvement. I loved your video!
You and I seem to have many things in common. We both love the outdoors (swimming, fishing, 4-wheelin'). I am also from a large family. I have 11 cousins. I have never ran a marathon or in the snow. I think your video was really good; your poem was very nicely written. The only adjustment I would make would be add about 15-20 more seconds of music.
ReplyDeleteI loved this video! Through watching this, I learned that your mom was a cancer survivor, which is such an incredible story. We have a lot in common, especially since we don't live too far apart! I also love riding four wheelers! My favorite thing about your video is the song. I am so mad haha! I tried for hours to get that song and I could not find an instrumental version of it anywhere! I love "We Rode in Trucks." It definitely signifies where we come from. I wouldn't change a thing about your video, it's great!
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you're a runner.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar to mine because we both have lots of cousins.
The best thing about your digital story is that I can truly tell it's from your heart.
One thing you could change is that you have one slide that the word “is” is on its own line. I would fix that.
One thing I learned about you is that you have nieces! I have a niece as well! One thing that we have in common is love for God and family!! The best thing about your video is the part of your mother. You almost made me shed a tear! That is an amazing story, girl! I would maybe change up the music a little bit - there is a little break at the end. Other than that its amazing! Great Job!
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is your mom survived cancer. Your family is similar than mine because you love to fish and enjoy the outdoors. The best thing about your digital story is the begin grabs you and your hooked. One think you could change is length the song but it's very good!!
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