Here is my rough draft for my illuminated text. I still have a few kinks to work out; when I uploaded it from Power Point, the speaker button was hidden and now it isn't. Also, a few of my transitions are off.
Illuminated Text
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Great job with the animation! I like the message behind the words.
ReplyDeleteI strongly suggest you use instrumental music! The lyrics of the song distract from the meaning of the words.
Your Illuminated text made me think about....
ReplyDeletehow important it is to tell your loved ones how much you care. Your words were very moving, and I liked the tone of the song.
You should consider changing/adding/taking out....
The second slide went a little too fast for me to read all the words. The song was a little too loud so the lyrics distracted from reading the words in your text.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....
that it shows your interests. From your illuminated text, I can tell you have those small town values and enjoy country. (At least I hope this is all correct) :-)
Your Illuminated text made me think about....how I would be willing to fight for my friends and family.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out....make font a different color; maybe it was just my computer, but it was a little hard for me to see.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....the great message behind it:).
Your Illuminated text made me think about fighting for what I believe in.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out.... Instrumental music would be best (I need to change this on mine too). Trying to read your text while lyrics are being sung is distracting.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is your background. I love your color scheme and it wasn't at all distracting to your message. Nice job :)
Your Illuminated text made me think about...telling people how much I love them, and always having their backs.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out.... Instrumental Music - it was hard for me to read the text and get the full message while also listening to the song lyrics.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....the background was really nice. And the quote was great!
Your Illuminated text made me think about....
ReplyDeletehow much I love my friends and family
You should consider changing/adding/taking out....
use a karaoke version of the song - great song - but use an instrumental version
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....
the quote itself - it was such a great quote
Your text reminded me to never give up.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Emily and suggest you use the song with no words, however the words support the meaning.
I like the inspiration behind your text.
Your text made me think of home.
ReplyDeleteI would suggest that you use a color for the letters that isn't so green. When using complementary colors, objects stand out, but they are harder to read. Just a different shade or a more yellow green would help.
I liked your quote, it made some good points.
Your Illuminated text made me think about not taking others for granted.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider adding a slide with just info on where the quote came from or something so the music doesn't seem to end abruptly. I had the same trouble.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is your background choice and that it flowed smoothly.